Author's Comments:

bananakin, 08 Jun 2009 11:48 pm

I started this page right after I finished the one before it. I got halfway through it and left it. Honestly, I hate this page. I wasn't even going to post it and redraw it instead, but... I know I wouldn't redraw it, at least not for a while... so we're moving on. ^^;

Oh yeah, there are some changes from this version from the last. One being that it takes place in the second game, not that it has any difference on the story I've planned. Secondly, Patch and Puddles already formed the team and have gained more members. Some of which will pop up randomly through the comic and others will be around more often. There are more changes, but you'll see as it goes on I guess...

Anyway, I'm still trying to figure out how to draw Raichu ears and Bellossom's flowers. DX And a few other things, too. (like backgrounds)... Heh, they look terrible, but I learned from this page (thank goodness) so the next page'll be better. : )

Oh yeah, I almost forgot. I won't be having character submissions this time around, since I have most of the story and it's characters decided. Buuuut...not the name's. DX So if you have any idea's for character names, that'd be awesome. ^^ So far I've only got names for Raichu(patch) Piplup(puddles) and the bellossom(you'll see the name on the next page) XD Flareon is nameless at the moment. If no one's got any ideas, then I can ask my brother. He came up with Pachumanji's name... O-o;

lol, sorry about the long comment. XD

User's Comments:

gizumimipichu, 08 Jun 2009 11:58 pm

If I was Patch, I would say yes! In my Pokemon Platiumn game I have a Flareon and I named him Flame. So maybe Flame could be the Flareons' name. ^_^

Korin the Blue Fox, 09 Jun 2009 12:03 am

Yeah, but thats a bit unorigonal. I mean, probobly 30% of the people with a starter fire pokemon name it that.

Thats what I named mine way bakc when. XP

Solo, 09 Jun 2009 12:19 am

I love Flareon already. XD!!

bananakin, 09 Jun 2009 12:27 am

gizumimipichu: We'll see what Patch says on the next page^^ Ooh, Flame, that's a possibility. Thanks. : )

Korin the Blue Fox: Maybe so, but it's still better than just calling her "Flareon". : )

Solo: ror, me too. My favorites are the slowbro and frosslass. I can't wait to get them in the comic XD unfortunately.. they need names, too. DX

Nashira, 09 Jun 2009 02:25 am

Possible names? Switch 'em around and stuff. Might give you some ideas

Flareon - Match (rhymes with Patch!), Bricko, Maha
Slowbro - Jace, Zippo (lol), Sillian
Froslass - Kiseki, Terrance, Sheen, Quartz, Julian

SushiGummy, 09 Jun 2009 03:01 am

How about the name Ember for the Flareon?

Just off the top of my head. :\ I think it's awesome.

Eevee Fan, 09 Jun 2009 12:01 pm

Name Hmm...Maybe the Flareon's name can be blaze. I dunno. I think blaze is cool. :) Your Raichu is getting better in my opinion. Also, I don't care if flareon has a type disadvantage against puddles, flareon will win!

the being, 09 Jun 2009 12:57 pm

yay..... this comic sorta feels like i'm misssing out on something....
:/

DragonhandX, 09 Jun 2009 02:43 pm

all a team in the pmd games is a water type, fire type, and electric type.

hmmmm, does the bellosom need one? what gender is it? if female jasmine. or rosemary. not sure if male.

for flareon, same question. looks female but i could be wrong.

the ears on the raichu looks great. the bellosom flowers are good. the petal size needs to be the same though.

bananakin, 09 Jun 2009 05:53 pm

Nashira: Match? I like that one, great idea. : D I like Zippo, too. ^^

SushiGummy: lol, that's actually what I named my flareon in diamond. XD

Eevee Fan: Blaze is good ^^ Thanks, raichu's getting easier to draw with each page. : )

the being: What do you mean? Like how the comic's going. Cause I understand, it seems to be rushed, right? I'm not good with making the comic.... flow? If that makes any sense at all.. ^^;

DragonhandX: Bellossom does have a name, which will be revealed on the next page. ^^ She's one of the few characters that do. Oh.. I should have said so eariler, but Flareon is a girl. XD
Thanks! Raichu's ears have been giving me the most difficulty, but I think they're looking better. ^^ Yeah, the petals are a bit off, huh? I didn't think they'd be a problem for me to draw but they kind of are ^^;

the being, 09 Jun 2009 10:21 pm

heh. Well...it seems like there's no....explaination for it. Though, i do know the team is
Patchumanji-Raichu (my fav pokemon! ^^)
Puddles-Piplup
Flareon-???
And they just rescued a bellossom...
But....I feel like there's a backround story or something i'm missing out on. Other than that, it's all good. *oogles Patchumanji* I love raichu so much! X)
*melts*
Patchumanji is a male, yes? I had a tiny bit of trouble figuring it out...but this page seems like he is male. Flareon seeems male to me though, now i know she is female. Though, puddles could be either gender and the personality would suit well.
(|)
Nice job on the ears. I'm quite good with the ears. you just needs to figure out where to start and finish and add details and then.....
mmph.

bananakin, 10 Jun 2009 12:39 am

the being:Maybe a future chapter should show a bit of the backstory to explain? Not that there's much to show, but maybe it'd help. I'll think about that a bit.

Patchumanji is a boy, as is Puddles. Flareon was intended to be a boy as well, but I thought there should be more female characters to even it out a bit. So she might be a bit boy-ish I suppose. ^^; I didn't really think it'd be a problem figuring out each characters genders. I guess I should try to make that more obvious in the future, huh? I think I'll also start working on getting a character page up. :)

As for the ears, I tend to have trouble drawing them from different angles... as you can see XD I'll get better at this, I hope. : )

the being, 10 Jun 2009 01:06 pm

heh. I like how you draw him(patchumanji), though. Err....do a character page! that would help!
You don't need to do a back story next chapter, but thanks. just talk about the characters backstory or whatever in the character page when you make one! :)
(I know there is a character page, but you know what i mean, yes?)

Korbeh, 10 Jun 2009 02:03 pm

One of them must be named Bob, for obvious reasons.

Hmm...Flareon: Charcoal, Sally, Bob

DragonhandX, 10 Jun 2009 03:58 pm

flareon=misty, pepper, thinking of more

gizumimipichu, 11 Jun 2009 09:20 am

I didn't know that Flareon was a girl till I read the rest of the comments...If it is a girl and she is tomboyish then maybe her name should be Kaji (means fire in Japanese). Sorry I kinda forgot to come back to this page...^_^;

KageOkamiNoGetsuga, 13 Jun 2009 09:29 pm

Flareon Maybe Asch if the Flareon was a boy, because after something uses a water move
there are puddles right? And after a fire move there are ashes, so Asch would probably have been a good name. OH! I got it! What about for another male fire character in the stor it would be named Asch later?

DigitalJolteon, 14 Jun 2009 12:45 pm

You could name the Flareon Ruby. Because Flareon's are red and stuff plus it's a rather feminine and uncommon name =>

Tigressgirl101, 17 Jun 2009 07:24 pm

My brother is wondering if Ching Chong Chime will be in the comic again. He really liked the character. Oh, and I think you should name the flareon Cinder.

Chidorisengan, 20 Jun 2009 09:55 pm

Eevee being my favorite Pokémon, and me hopefully catching one when I get Platinum,
(Off-Topic Question: is it possible to get an Eevee before the National Dex is obtained?)
I've thought of a name for Each Eon.
Eevee: Eva
Jolteon: Raiden (Japanese for Thunder and Lightning)
Vaporeon: Hydria
Espeon: Silver (Named after the best Hedgehog in the Sonic Verse that EVERYONE hates.)
Umbreon: Shadow (Named After the Hedgehog EVERYONE LOVES FOR NO REASON.)
Glaceon: Grace
Leafeon: Forest
And now the one that natters in this comic:
Flareon: Blaze (Synonym for a fire)

bananakin, 24 Jun 2009 01:09 am

the being: okay. I'll try to work on a character page soon!

Korbeh: ha ha. Bob is a great name. :)

Dragonhand: I like pepper, but misty sounds more like a water type..

gizumimipichu: Yeah, I haven't really made it seem like she's a girl. ^^;

KageOkamiNoGetsuga: Not a bad idea. There might be another fire type in the future, I think. :)

DigitalJolteon: Oooh. I think I might go with Ruby since it is feminine. That would help to clear up the confusion on her being a girl. XD thanks!

Tigressgirl101: Yep, all of the members of Team strawberries will be back. Ching Chong Chime will have evolved, though.

Chidorisengan: Eevee is one of my favorites, too. And, I think you can get eevee before the national dex. Someone gives you an egg... I think. I can't remember. ^^;

the eevee bro, 02 Sep 2009 10:35 pm

pud plllllipplop aka pudy is mad

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